Wonderfully written. My fav line: 'The dead pretended to ignore their fate.'
Adjective heaven awash in the rapids of a nightmare tale!
All I can say is that it is AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!
I really like this story. You describe things so you feel as if you are really there.
Summer Kay Chiizu
I love your story. The voice is just perfect.
Wow! What a journey, this author has talent. You can visualise, feel and almost 'smell' the charged atmosphere. His clever use of language is refreshing. I admit sometimes I got a bit lost, but then the author cleverly points you in the direction - HE wants you to go, then miraculously it all falls into place... the speed picks up, adding goosebumps to the adrenalin already gripping the reader.